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I Am Hate by A-M-A-P I Am Hate by A-M-A-P
This is the third(3) and final part to this three(3) part series I created. I hope you all enjoy this one.

As the fighting continued over this 'mysterious girl in red' over Death and Evil. It was Death who had more of a heart than Evil did because Death always seen people who came before him, trying to be reborn again! "The girl in red' sparked something in Death that was never there?.. However, Hate was watching this whole time and didn't agree with Evil's minuscule's methods on his brother, Death, so Hate took Evil, removed his giant fur coat of dead animal and human fur, tied him down on the raw surface of hell's floor and set him on fire and watched. Hate just smiled and hovered over Evil's body while he burned and laughed at him.. The endless screams from Evil was a soothing tune to Deaths ears! But Death couldn't stop thinking about 'the girl in red'.. Now that Hate has taken care of Evil, Death has a chance now to show 'the girl in red' he has a heart. A heart full of black tar, emptiness, soulless but for girl to decide, none other.. What will happen... ?

This is a mini-fantasy series. Three parts were in the making of this. Go to part one to see how it begins!: I Am Death

Edit 1: I apologize for my big watermark. I was really happy how the fire turned out and totally forgot to reduce the opacity and the size.. :D
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:iconmoikkaeps:
I really like this series and the story that goes with it. Love the way they trade the mistery for violence/action as they progress. I know it's not easy but I think it would be actually perfect if it was a little longer, perhaps in 5 parts or so, not more but enough to allow the themes to develop more.
About this particular part, I really like the art direction. Obviously the colors match the setting but I think the way you painted it also works well to transmit the feeling of heat (in both literal and figurative way). The character design is also good and the hatred is well portrayed in the assailant's countenance.
On one last note, if you haven't already, you should check out my favorite painter, Francisco de Goya, as I think the way he depicts "dark" subjects is simply amazing :) and especially considering it was 200 years ago!

Good job :)
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This isn't my area of expertise, but I think that I could be of some help. Both my parents are in the design business (Mom has been doing graphic and web design for 18 years and my dad does game design)

I think that if you make the edges a little darker on the dragon (assuming it is a dragon) it will make him pop more. Not in solid black, but just solidify the edges slightly. draw attention to the main focus of the picture. At the bottom jaw of the beast you have a defined outline. Also, add more to the monster. You can't tell what it is really. A dragon? The Devil? I love the concept, but it needs more so people can see what you see in your eyes. Maybe wings or horns. A body would be very helpful in general.

Do the same thing next to the right eye.Same thing with what I'm assuming is a cauldron or flaming rock/fireball. It's not really clear what it's exactly supposed to be. Maybe add some more detail to it. More definition. If it's a rock add some lumps. If it's a cauldron add a handle to it; fireball, some glowing cracks that show the fire within.

You should probably define the background some more so we can tell where he is exactly. In a volcano or Hell (looks like somewhere with a lot of fire). You seem to have a lot of smoke so if you can, do a simple sketch (nothing to detailed) of something like a cave wall behind the smoke.

Outside of these small details I think you did an amazing job! This type of art is something that I look at in awe and would love to do one day myself. The color scheme is great and the lighting is wonderful. Keep up the good work!
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465lps Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I think the effects are awesome and your description tells me a lot of the conflict.
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Adimadii Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Really nice!
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blackhearted6 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is awesome! :D
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh that is just too cool!
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Personaminato Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014
wow nice one 
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Tsujito Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is a very interesting story. From the start each part adds a new character and shapes the story. This is very well made and i can tell a lot of though went into it.

This picture represents hate marvelously, the use of symbolism makes it memorable.
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askdrakethegardevoir Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing,the pic kinda reminds me of hexis from furngully tho
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songoftheshadow Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Student General Artist
This... is amazing. I really don't know how to put it differently.
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springl0cked Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Student General Artist
this is absolutely beautiful! I love it so very much! ;v;
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Ankredible Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Professional
I'ts okay ... and you should try adding more hard edged details
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Anonymous-Goose Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just so amazing....
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waraiigoe Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, I love it! Love the way the face just emerges out of the dark! Amazing!
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PotatoRainbow Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg this is very wonderful!! Keep up the great work~ :D
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Twilight16Master Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think the story to this is really confusing, difficult to follow, and not very interesting. but I really REALLY like the illustration. is that supposed to be a depiction of Hate, or of Evil? because if it's Hate I think it's perfect. I always thought of Hate as being something savage, destructive, raging, hazy, vague, and barely controllable if at all controllable. very much like fire and smoke, and like a wild beast or demon. the fact that it looks a little blurry definitely adds to that effect.
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EmilXOM Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
There's something really terrifying about this piece, nicely done!
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Shipwreck5897 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Its got a very good concept to it that I find unique.
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AWildPackOfDonkeys Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Student Artist
The idea and art are both amazing, but I also recommend using words like smirked  or sneered instead of smiled to make it seem more sinister. For future reference of course.
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Cassyhattori63 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Professional General Artist
I like it, I can't wait to read the third part.  I'm going to read part 1 now. ^^
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kingoflostandfound Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Coolest thing I have seen tonight,the skull,fire,shading, everything. Love it!
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Phenometron Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
You're the master!
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Ahmedeus89 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Sweet Christmas Pudding! I love it!
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Lunitidal Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the contrast in this and how the eyes are glowing with the same intensity of the fire! Hate also seems to be materializing out of the smoke around him, which adds to the eeriness of the piece.
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Barracuda7160 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting! I like it!
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botskey Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Impressive. The expression is very eye catching. Love the contrast of the bright colors to the dark.
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LindArtz Featured By Owner Edited Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really awesome artwork! I just love the lighting (that always gets me! ); and the overall warmth (in terms of color) of this piece. Nicely done. ^^
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Draakor Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is astounding!

You have a good sense of depth and shading. The colors blend so nicely, too! If I were to write a review, I'd rate this 9.5/10.
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LunaOfMidnight Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The coloring and shading are awesome!  ^^  
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LostbunniesofWendy Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Nice! It makes me kinda scared!
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